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Potato Chips by ~aethercowboy:iconaethercowboy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Villanelle


I will not eat potato chips
Unless I have a dip.
A crispy spud ne'er passes my lips.
I will not eat potato chips,
Not even just the tip.
Past the chips my hand slips.
I will not eat potato chips
Unless I have a dip.
©2006-2008 ~aethercowboy
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Another triolet (Chetertonian). This one is about potato chips, which I loathe, but love if there's a dip handy.

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~SnicksRocksHerSpots:iconSnicksRocksHerSpots: Dec 1, 2006, 10:50:23 AM Mood: Delighted
This poem makes me happy :aww: (and it also makes me want chips and dip)

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Either I mistake your shape and making quite
Or else you are that shrewd and knavish sprite
called Robin Goodfellow?

Thou speak'st aright;
I am that merry wanderer of the night.
=Itti:iconItti: Mar 14, 2008, 11:43:21 AM
What's a triolet? This isn't a villanelle.

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~aethercowboy:iconaethercowboy: Mar 15, 2008, 7:34:16 PM
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=Itti:iconItti: Mar 21, 2008, 12:07:52 PM
Might be worth having a link like that in the description? :)

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